Lopchan-jee,

Yes, we have very similar sentiments as well.

I was also making a point that a prose-poetry (गद्य-कविता) does not have to be rhyme-less (अनुप्रासविहिन). In fact, a little bit of rhyme would make it sweeter than otherwise. I am much influenced by Bhupi Serchan’s rhyme-rich prose-poetry.

You might have noticed I have tried to play with rhyme in certain stanzas. It certainly takes a little bit of extra effort. However, the outcome would be rewarding.

So, I strongly suggest you to go for rhyme and quasi-meters (अपूर्ण छन्द) even when you compose pure prose-poetry.

Best,

Nepe

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