A very very nice piece!! I absolutely loved everybit of the story.

Especially:

यस्तै यस्तै कुरा मा रुमलिईरहें । त्यहि सोफामा निदाएंछु । त्यहि टिभि कोठामा । गहिरो गरि निदाएको नै त होईन, तर पनि झपक्क भएछुं ।

टिभि खुल्लै थियो । आमा कति बेला हो आउनु भयो ।

‘हेर त, आफ्नो खाटमा त सुत्नु’  बिस्तारै आफै सित गुन्गुनाउनु भयो । मैले आँखा खोलिन् ।

टिभि निभाउनु भयो । मेरो नजिकै आउनु भयो । अनि मेरो निधारमा हात राख्नु भयो । च्यादर ल्याएर ओडाईदिनु भयो । जाँदा मेरो चिया को गिलास बोकेर जानु भयो ।

यस पटक चाँहि म मज्जाले निदांए ।

I m just a week away from being at home and having my mom put a blanket over me and saying the same dialogue with  the same affection!! Its so exciting :)

I usually read stories in a single go!! I was waiting 4 u to put all the episodes b4 startin to read ur story!! I kept on checkin and checkin and found out today that all the episodes are there n the was quite an experience going through all the episodes and all those posts!

To be honest, I wasnt expecting an abrupt ending like it was!! But on a second thought that abrupt ending made the story more beautiful!!

Keep on writing maan...........