I am glad to hear that your gf liked the earlier poem. And, if you think she will he happy again, then feel free dude. 

bears23,

I don't know what to say but it sounds kinda weird to me that the a poem can affect the relationship so deeply. You may be surprised to hear that I started writing when I was going through rough time in my life. Why don't you try writing something youself? I hope she will be happy to read something that comes out straight from your heart. I hope things will work out for you. Good luck !!

Sndy Dijyu,

Thank you very much for those encouraging note. I will try to bring more pieces in coming days.