Posted by: crazy_love January 31, 2008
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Carixma Ji,

World full of life

But my life is lost.

Fighting to be alive,

Death is chasing me.

 

It is really sad stanza but I like the way you gave shape to words and depth of feelings. Keep it up!

 

This always reminds me we are mortal, aren't we?

 

 

 

 

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