Posted by: ratobhaley January 31, 2008
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Nepaliboy there is a gaping hole in your story.
When the girl fumbles and the pebble falls you have to be blind to not see the color of the pebble. Specially since at least three people are staring at the outcome so intently.
This is just a "FEEL GOOD" story if anything.
When the girl fumbles and the pebble falls you have to be blind to not see the color of the pebble. Specially since at least three people are staring at the outcome so intently.
This is just a "FEEL GOOD" story if anything.