Posted by: shirish January 29, 2008
रोमान्टिक नेपाली गजल -
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Sure Nepe Guru, I will modify and try to make it better. I need more constructive criticisms like this to improve.

In the mean time, one more sher -

 

म भने निन्द्रामै पनि हिडेर आउने 
तिमी भने उठ्नलाई नै टालटुलहरु !

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