Posted by: Dananah January 5, 2008
Unleashed emotions-- My Poetic chaos!
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Nirman bro!!:oD

if ur a void, a space,
i feel thee!:oD (ask those esp interested in architecture, if u dun believe me!;oP)
faceless u aint to me!
u stranger wannabe!;oP

a blink?
u do exist for me, even if its just for a moment
u, the lovely letters in my screen!;oP
a code, an emoticon?
which brings humor and msgs to me,
come out, come out, show more, open urself to me!;oP

a ghost u say?
oh no! staying invisible and yet all-seeing me?
ghost arent no diff from us humans, unfair they seem to be? :o( ;oP
a lost soul u say?
or u missing ur (sexy?;oP) body?
stop playing hide-and-seek, a body seeks its soul,
we(the bodies) do, u've got no choice but to agree!
(cos i speak the truth! seriously pls dun "fight" me on this!;oP)

just a rant u say?
when effort is placed to write, effort is made to read? effort spent to think?
if ur gone, wat happens to the effort(s) that was taken?  forgotten? :oS hehe
a traveling dust u might be,
guess wat? u make me sneeze
im sensitive to u, u see
but its all good, cos then i do realize ur here around me! :oD

and do remember, the wind will never stop blowin again, on me
i will start sneezing, telln me ur back! my lovely bluey!( ;oP jpt wahahaha)

anyways needed to type and thot might end up typing too much if i let myself(lack of time and lack of sleep u see :oS hehe) and since i had wanted to say hi to u(nirman bro!:oD) plus loved that poem of urs(wat do i not love of urs?;oP hehe) so yeah...just came up with a "reply" haha..well not really a poem ..but one gets the gist?;oP that i was enjoying myself and of cos enjoying everything wat u shared?:oD...

until we see more of urs...have a good one and hope all is well!:oD
good day!:oD
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