Sajha_Gazer,
I read first part on the very first day you posted, and as Ive mentioned in earlier post, it was rather boring. Not a kind of story which you used to post i.e. Dating Miss Sajha, I met her in Sajha and many others. I though it was boring but when I forced myself to complete the story only because of Sajha_Gazer brand, Im being very honest here. Then  i found it really moving. Its a different write up but I enjoyed it, I think u r experimenting yourself with different style . Keep it up my friend

Wishing you a very happy New year and hope to read your interesting stores in coming years too And hey when is your incomplete story coming out? I think its already 2008

One final note, happy to see good chemistry between two great writers of Sajha Sum_Off and Sajha_Gazer