gazer mate,
interesting read indeed although i must say, and this is by no means to demean the quality of story teller that you have in you, i find, at many places, the plot too technical (may not be for some but i am sure for many sajhaites) and the narrative too documentary/technical journal oriented. that made me wonder, what made you decide it's worthwhile posting it in here in sajha?

i have realized, and this is again by no means to ridicule your own skill at judging as you yourself have been around this place for a while, that  there are not many varieties of stories that you find worthwhile posting in sajha where basically, when put bluntly, sex and "photo-shopped" images of celebrities solicit more attention.

one thing i am not able to comprehend is how come 'your' creator decided to transplant the silicon chip on his forehead, which is, due to the presence of forehead bones, is a difficult place for any transplantations.  And he did it with dettol and a mere handyplast hahaha..  :P. wouldn't transplanting in hand, where most of the veins connected to the nervous system end, make more sense?

all in all, a unique read. glad to see someone putting on time to narrate stories of a different taste in sajha. kudos!

all the best.

LooTe