Posted by: Rythm December 9, 2007
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I was unaware that you had finished this story and had posted it as I have not been a frequent visitor of sajha recently. I read the whole story and wondered how could one think and develop such a plot. It was quite different from the ones that you have written and it truly takes a highly creative and complex mind to write stories as such. I have always complimented you on your writings and your ability to think about the most minor as well as major details. This one was no different, however, it did not touch my heart like some other stories of yours have. I loved "From Kavre to Thimi", the one about ANA and also the one about the jacket. They kept me thinking for a long time and wondering how you coud have developed such a wonderful plot and potrayed emotions so easily. I could visualize everything, and I actually cried while I read from Kavre toThimi. I believe that if you have the ability to make someone cry with the aid of your fictional characters, then you certainly are one powerful writer. This one was really good too and the details were astounding, yet it did not touch my heart but did bring out admiration for you. And of course, as always please keep writing as your stories are always a pleasure to read. :)
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