Deep
Had been a while since I read a Nepali Upanyas (last one was B.P's Sumnima). I have to say, I'd pay to read your stories. But man, can you write, that's a lot brother.

But want to congratulate you, you have elevated yourself over many other storywriters here in Sajha. Your flow is commendable and your narration is superb.

Please don't stop. I haven't finished reading the story, but I now feel like Bangey and Supari used to leave right next door. Twakele chai kaile kaile tharkauthyo; but the girls would make any bad day shine brighter.