Ingenious style of narration, well defined plots, and close-approximation of the narrative makes "The Golden Girl" shine through the dark and dingy Netherlands' weather..I simply  loved the piece and I am glad I waited for all these days to read it. The plot setting was innovative yet simple and I liked the ending too. It made me optimistic and hoping that good things will happen to Keshya and her baby if the story was to have another extension :)

I was totally taken by surprise when the male character's name was introduced for the first time. All these years of assurance that "Avani" was a girl's  name was flushed down the bathroom...:)  Few lines from the story just stole my heart as they were written so beautifully. Will reflect on it sometime later... Also, as CH said, very  bold topic and a total justice done Amber :)

Loote--I disagree with whoever said "all men are Hippocrates," because circumstances with other things mashed define our actions and tagging somebody as Hippocrate would just be a easy  way of letting that person off the hook. And you are more than welcome to disagree with me on this.