Was getting into it and beginning to enjoy my read until the "to be cntd" part),  However, felt it was too long but nevrtheless, was worth the time spent  Hope to read the finale soon.  Also, having followed your works since you first started posting, the research you've done for the stories is worthy of commendation and you somehow make me feel that it was you (your life events) in most of them. 

BTW, am loving the part of the palay's (chankhay) line "Yo nani ta khacchar po recha. Kasto mitho nepali boldo raicha ho.”  For some unknown reason it just cracked me up.  Have a nice wkend!!