Posted by: shirish October 25, 2007
बन्द गर सम्भोगहरु !
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Nepe guru

Manu Manjil is really a poet.

I read the same poem few more times and found it more pleasent.

There is a great flow.

The examples are local yet great.

The construction is awesome.

Like you said it is a short story.

He described the pretext so well and the conclusion was the climax.

साँच्चै, यो समय, यो परिवेशमा

तिमीलाई बाँच्न दिनुभन्दा ठूलो सजाय

अर्को के हुन सक्थ्यो, हँ ?

म बेवकुफ !

तिम्रा लागि सजाय पो सोचिरहेको थिएँ ।

 

I related King G and his pathetic situation right now with the poem.


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