Samsara, I promise I never deleted a thing!! Maybe there was an error when you posted it because I never saw your response. Thanks for the responding though. About my errors, as Kina Kina pointed out, there was so +2 at the time I am trying to write the story about. Some one also pointed out that I rushed the story and such. And as someone pointed out there were contradictions and so on! I am glad that you enjoyed it... I guess I was thinking about my mom too when I wrote this piece!