I swear I'd responded to this thread when you first wrote it but its not there anymore (??). Did you delete it Rythm? I actually immersed myself into this story when I read it back then and I still rememeberjust having called home that night which made the story even more dearer to me. It just brough about all the sacrifices my mom did for me and my siblings back in da days...And it was a lot, my friend!! Thanks for the great read. I loved it and pls do keep writing (I'm positive someone deleted my thread as I remember responding to this one earlier). And about the errors you talk about, hell no!! Its you trying to be a perfectionist as I just don't see one (and I AM THE ULTIMATE PERFECTIONIST YOU'LL EVER COME ACROSS).