Great story Samaf!! As always there is a twist in your story... I love how you write the details like- "When my wife did not hear anything from me either, she held the box up close to my son's eyes and said, “Babu timro maamu le ghotera safaa gareko hera.” The baby started crying. " To write like you do, you must be very observant of the people, their behavior - actions and reactions, and other things around you.