i would not say that this is the best work that u have done, worth a read though...... m sorry if i tend to incline a bit towards critique but its jus to better u or may i say to better u than u already r rite now......n m known better for my critics than my appreciations :D... i can find contradictions within the story itself, washing her husbands feet n drinking the same water n then her son taking the +2 classes, development too soon, dont u think? and some other stuffs... there is a slight glitch in depicting the time that u wanted to....... but i did like the part where the boy changes his mind after seeing her smile n the last part where he hands the first copy of his book to bhagwati........somethin almost fell out of my eyes ;) this is the storyline of a classic nepali film...a hit one though :P weazel