Posted by: sangfroid August 31, 2007
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Nice poem.... but I would like to comment hai...(as u have requested)
poem from start reflects pure Nepali paaanah....but at the end, tyo "life saver candy" ali suhayenah..... (my opinion) .
Rumal will be better than tissue paper....
how about submitting it to some section of Kids of some newspaper of Nepal ???