I read for the first time but I heard you have written masterpieces before. I liked your story telling ( discriptive) method but the story awww.. It's not becos you wrote about some sexy nature with freudian complex but the story as a whole is just suitable for some B class movie maker who looks for some twist,sex,voilance to pass easily on censor board in the name of theme or art in the movie. Why? you failed to explore Arjun's unconcious mind, he is not just crazy. Catching two women on bed and peeking thru hole during makingout which leads to killings just makes story too direct and cheap. Lowest the subconcious mind you can explore, freudian complex becomes much better to write and to be included in the story. You probably have read b.p.'s books for an example not that I expect you to write in same style.It was not necessary to alleviate two women's emotional bonding to physical level. Odepius complex would have work without going physical ( constant reasoning of Reshma, Nirmala's answer is also annoying).There is not much about mother and son relationship that brought them closer on concious level. Homosexuality in Maioist camp ? that wasn't pleasant. Not that it doesn't exist 100% but certainly would be looking for a aethist in mormon camp in the first place. The way boy discovers a hole in rural house is another cheap thrill. It's like story about nabbing some porn in hidden treasure to learn sex in villiages but if the plot was learning it thru cows/goats, reality would be much more closer. There was a interesting study of sex in the bombay's largest slums where walls are thin and holes exist all over the places, I would say not much difference to rural nepali houses. Darkness is the thickest wall in those places for exploitation but the story tells the opposite making it less of reality. If you have seen "city of joy" , you probably would know what I'm talking about. That is why I called your plot B grade movie style, sorry if I have said too much. Keep writing though because you're a good writer and I'm zip zero. I just know how to complain and not much of a lovy-dovy talker.