Soon ma Soogandha!!! John not only writes well, but also is humble. I am curious what Cleopatra bhanney manchey le wrote to you, John, but I personally find your writings very entertaining. I cannot say if it is flawless or without any more room for improvement for I do not possess the ability to judge, however, as a lay person reader, I think you are a good writer. The very fact that my eyebrows rise a tad centiimeter when I see that you have posted a new story and I immediately feel like reading it as soon as possible demonstrates the level of regard I put on your literary worth. So keep on writing, brother. Knowing that you live in New York, I hope to meet you in person soon, that is if you allow yourself to zip in zip out of your anonymity.