Posted by: foolsparadise August 29, 2007
SUM_OFF's: A MAOIST, A MOTHER, A WIFE
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Hi Sum off, for the first time I am replying to you twice on your story. I am sorry if my igonorance have let you down. I can imagine the pain in a writing genius when a foolish reader like me undermines his masterpiece. But trust me, I was not in denial of the thrill and shrill in your story. Also I am not arguing against the case of suppressed sexual emotions getting outlet in various forms in our tabooed society. My dissatisfaction was on the crux of your story. Because the set, the characters and the imageries were not consistent with the progress of the story, or atleast I thought so. You have not given enough hints for average readers like us on why Arjun concluded that his mum was a whore who let everyone his hand inside her. By your own accounts, he was smart, intelligent, diligent, trustworthy, respectful; and also loving and caring to his mother: not very consistent with the characters of an acute psychopath. Fair enough that one cant find justification on a psycho's crimes. But criminal psychology have always been explained satisfactorily in one or the other way- by exploring the person's sorrounding, past, present and the behavioural changes he/she undergoes. In this case, it seems I am too dumb to decipher a reasonable explaination. Please unravel the mystery if you have a better explaination than our rt. hon'ble CH and LK. And for heaven's sake don't delete your stories and I'd also prefer reading your unedited replies. Readers believe in you more than anybody else. So don't you worry about one or two unpleasant replies. Good day
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