Posted by: foolsparadise August 28, 2007
SUM_OFF's: A MAOIST, A MOTHER, A WIFE
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Sum off , I must be honest with you. For the first time I disliked most of the schemes in your story. Pardon me if I missed the Freudian factor and the psychoanalyses underneath it, but for me this story didn’t click at all. I felt like you made an attempt to hook up your worst nightmares into one and got the result in the form of this story. It is very difficult to believe the unbelievable. I think you are inclined to believe seeing more horror than the horror you actually see while events unfold, and panic. The horror is not that horrific, as far as I can see. But who knows? Kids born since 1996 may start showing Arjun’s character soon. As I said earlier, I am not sure if I have understood this story. So excuse me if I am digressing. But because I can visualise my very own kitchen of the past in the one that you have portrayed in the beginning, it’s hard for me to be convinced with the following events, the Economics, the Geography, the Politics, the Psychology and the Crimes. Like I said before, it’s hard to believe the unbelievable. Of course this is a fiction, but if I can familiarize the events or at least see them from proximity, I feel satisfied reading it. I am your true follower so pardon me if I missed something this time. And yes, I am saving some coins in a box to buy your books. I think there’s already enough for the first one. Am I quicker than you?
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