Posted by: sirus_me August 28, 2007
Notebook Help Needed
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SATHI, YOU SHOULD LEARN ENG 1O1 IN ORDER TO IMPROVE YOUR ENGLISH. YOUR EVERY SENTENENCE HAS ERRORS. HOW CAN ANYBODY HELP YOU IF YOU DON'T HELP YOURSELF FIRST? YOUR FIRST ENG 1O1 LESSON FROM SAJHA. FIRST OF ALL, I AND MYSELF ARE REDUNDANTS. THE FIRST SENTENCE IS GRAMMATICALLY WRONG. IT SHOULD BE WRITTEN BETTER AS: I AM LOOKING FOR A NOTEBOOK NOTHING FANCY THAN BLAH, BLAH. SECONDLY, I'll just it using it SHOULD BE "I'll be just using for school work THIRDLY, I don't want to be compromising on quality as i would want it to last me for atleast a few years.. and it should work great while it does. SHOULD BE : I DON'T WANT TO COMPROMISE ON QUALITY AS I AM LOOKING FOR ONE THAT LASTS FOR ATLEAST A FEW YEARS AND WORKS GREAT. LASTLY, Any and every suggestion will be highly appretiated SHOULD BE "ANY SUGGESTION WILL BE HIGHLY APPRECIATED". AND I KNOW NEPALESE BEHAVIOR, THAT INSTEAD OF THANKING, THEY WOULD START WRITTING SOME VULGAR LANGUAGE AND SO WOULD YOU.
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