सोध्दै थिएँ पुगुन्जेल छुरा मेरो हाडमा के लेखेको भनन औंलाले ढाडमा मञ्जुर थियो मायाको यो तरीका पनि खेद बस् यसो ग-यौ अर्कैको आडमा Loote-jee, It is such a pleasure to have you read and comment on my piece. And on your query, yes, I was supposing the second verse to be the most agonizing one. The opening verse is simply about the naivety and the extent of trust. The second verse is about the remorse, anguish and grief. The protagonist could have forgiven that little act of insanity or whatever it was, had it been of his beloved’s own. But man, it wasn’t. And so it really hurts. In fact the second verse was really bleeding my heart when I was composing it. Thank you, Loote-jee, for your observation. Nepe