Thank you for packing up your summer a little early and come join us for last few days of summer. People might have come to your life this summer as well and some of them bode goodbye to you. They might have added some flavor to your life. Assuming you have an adult emotion, you must have noticed that it is a season and it ends. Terrific story once again. I like the way you go into details. They add dimension to your character, scenes, activities and feelings. You seem to be so balanced with these details that none of them can be branded as mere exaggeration. With such a flow, you draw us so close to your characters, they tend to live inside us. I liked the way you ended up some of your paragraphs. They are witty appropriate and strong statements. "He had earned the worst enemies and best friends with that." "He loved what he was doing so completely, that there was no need to pretend to be anyone else. " "That day she emerged from there into a different world, and adult world, where memories of the first love lingered, but summers always end." One thing for sure, your female characters are so peculiar, I find them mysterious as Dewas did. May be you are right that it takes an adult to notice what one feels is love and what one missed was love. I still wonder if it was a kid or a girl in Darpana who kicked Deewas in one turn and realized that someone is missing in passenger's seat.