Amber wrote, "Deewas was insecure, especially around females- creatures he found mysterious and more intimidating than the turbulences and runways of the West Nepal. Flying was his passion. He loved what he was doing so completely, that there was no need to pretend to be anyone else" Nice details there...You just explained the hallmark traits of someone educated in the missionary boarding "all-boys" school system in India. Gotta give props to the attention to detail in all your stories (the way Darpana prepared herself for Deewas' arrivel, her tear-drop incidents, etc.)...However, for the rest of the story, I just felt it was a lil too bland. Contained basic conversation which consisted of only the small talks we hear every other day. Maybe it was my stupidity to expect something sensational that contained humor and suspense as, being a reader you pre-assume some of the scenes and when it doesn't go as planned, it's kinda dissapointing. BTW, You have the gift of writing but I felt the story just wasn't captivating enough (in my viewpoint only as I felt no connection to it). You're a good writer but I regret to say that this story is not one of my favorite work of yours. Thanks for the read and I will look forward to more. Have a great wkend!