SITARA, You gave a name to Danny's alter ego. You chose different gender and a different age for Debbie. I think, that was creative. Assuming you don't have first hand experience with split personality, I admire your ability to do justice with the subject - so delicate and unconventional. Your words are colorful and poetic. Description is so vivid, some of your scenes scared this kid. Such a pleasure to see you again. I wish you have your creative juice flowing and we get the rest of the story soon.