Finally got a chance to read the whole story ! What an awesome narration! No wonder why you have gotten a miles long queue of fans ! :D sum off, I really enjoyed the virtual world of mangala niwas through your words / lines. Each and every tiny sensory detail and description made the story so lively that one can feel like watching the whole scene through his/ her own eyes and eavesdropping the quarrel ,noise or even Dhane’s silence by oneself. and yes! that's the quality of a gifted writer I guess. I greatly applaud for your writing skill. And ..waiting eagerly for the next Friday.