Sum off, I feel a sort of Tolstoy effect when I read your stories. You can very well be one of our own version of him, so set your sight far ahead. If I could get what I want from your stories, I would ask for two more things: 1. Little bit of aesthetics added in to your articulation. Your imagination is already an art but an artistic imagination would be even more delightful. More poetic and less essayistic, if you know what I mean. Just like you add sarcasm so effectively with such an ease, and without jargons. 2. Avoid imposing your opinions/cynicism through the narrator. Lessen your opinion on good and bad and if you are determined to use them, speak them out through the characters and let the narrator stay neutral. You are a great writer and hope you wont mind us expecting more from you. Good Luck!