excellent plot and it's not so easy to narrate a plot like this coz of the subtleness of the characters involved! a bit of love, bit of sex, bit of emotions, parenting, childhood, mysteries, accidents, realizations, admittances ..wow! you surely can be a good story-teller! :P. i believe in strength of the plots and the delineation of the characters rather than petty details and grammars and all, but if you could polish to get rid of some of the obvious errors, you can go for publication and am not kidding! thanks for this "gift" ! :D LooTe