John, this writing of yours is such an amazing piece of literature that I couldn't resist the temptation to commend you. Its exceptionally well written to say the least. But may be the magic of this story and the spell she has cast on your heart , which you believe is love, wouldn't have remained the same had your anticipation been accomplished that long night. I would say don't indulge too much on the offer she made and deprived you of later on, for it may just be the tipping point after which you'd have to redefine the meaning of love time and again. I liked the writer John Galt much more than the character John Galt in this story. Keep writing sir. And congratulations Sitara.