Liked your story! Lovely third person narration. Sometimes.....a person from another country could as well be from another planet, right? Could you have included episodes on why Reena feels so lonely in her marriage......we read about her feeling lonely in America but does that necessarily translate into her feeling out of place in her marriage??....so maybe if you included one or two instances of that may be the story would be more complete......but then thats just what i think. Beautiful writing......please keep them coming!