vivashme I admire your courage and attempt to write a ghazal in classical beher although not all the sher follow laghu and dirgha fully. I am sorry to admit that I did not understand a thing with that ghazal of yours. It does look like. in an attempt to write a ghazal in accordance with rahsso and dirgha only. Ghazal should possess some "ookti" that deviate from the normal but this one possess too much of ookti-bachitra which makes beyond comprehension. I hope you will take the criticisms positively. I am confused- Are you the real writer or just coping and pasting??