ok 1st thing 1st..someone says..never wrote a fiction before..so i guess its not too wrong for one to assume the person has wrote non-fictions before?share those too!!!:@ (some words have been deleted since they might be considered abusive ;oP hehe) anyways after capt comments..there is nothin to much to add..(well u know wat i mean?dun u err..Audrey?;oP hehe)but i guess i still will be addin..so yeah pls tolerate ;oP.. at the start..thot i came into some horror story...esp imagining the ballerina being licked by some gruesome tongue :o| hehe..but guess it was a very nice suprise how the story shaped out (pls tolerate me!!its hard to express myself!:oS hehe)..and time is kinda runnin out here(someone prayers have been heard yet again?:oS hehe) but immensely enjoyed it..would have loved it if it was a tad bit longer(well u know how it is..when ur enjoyin smthing u wish for it to last longer?hehe)....kinda might have hit some of soft spots too hehe..u sure its a fiction?;oP... and well if these lines def are quite unforgettable for me..."Promises were made to meet up and keep in touch. But then Life happens and everyone knows what happens when that happens" ..well i may forget(me being me :oS hehe)..but yeah def unforgettable eh?hehe..ok ok before i make more non sense ;oP... have a good one..and hope alls well there...wats with the new..errr..u know wat i mean?;oP...lucky someone said hi..if not i wouldnt have seen this :o|...and def waitin for more just like the other folks.. ps im def not kind!so accept ;oP hehe.. good day!:oD