Posted by: Captain Haddock February 26, 2007
Fiction- The Music Box
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Very nice, Audrey. I liked the story. Very touching and close to reality. We are a product of our experiences and I have noticed throughout my life that those of us who have had humble experiences often turn out to be better human beings than those of us who have always had it easy and take everything for granted. Wealth without responsibility is a bad thing - such wealth seldom lasts and often wreaks havoc while it does. I thought you did a good job telling the story. I like the way you use event and anecdotes to build up the character of Ranu and leave it to the user to be the final judges. Good job.
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