Posted by: Hary in FedEx February 21, 2007
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Rahulvai U are great writer as always....
but i have a Comment for u......arent there any words available in our own language.....for an example -u could have use "Maya" or 'Prem" rather than " Pyar" in ur Great Poem and same thing with ur Comment to Nakpore ...u could have use "Pida" or "Dukha" than "Dard"
just my view....never mind
If u use totally our words it becomes more beautyful..and warm
Cheers,