Meera! You wrote " .. Enjoyed it immensely! Yes your grammar is flawed but then again I would rather read an entertaining piece than a gramatically correct one. Ms. Pandey's story was good too. I like this one better just because of all the tauntings that goes on. .. " "..tauntings that goes on. " or "..tauntings that go on." or "..taunting that goes on." Which one is grammatically correct? HEHE! In all seriousness!, I laud your honest opinion that sounds so original instead of saying "What a great piece!" or otherwise without revealing the reasons why the reviewer thought so. It's so easy to make mistakes when it comes to grammar. I tend to make mistakes myself a lot. Cheers to you Ma'm! I have not read this one but I have read a couple of other Sum_Offs. The best part about his stories to me is the Nepali psyche and nostalgia that only a Nepalese can instill in another fellow Nepalese as you read on. Remember for example the 'abhyas pustika' expression for a exercise book we used in school back in the day. :)