I am sorry, I did not hear you and I took intermittent breaks and finally I am able to finish reading it in numerous sittings :-). Even then, it made perfect sense to me and I enjoyed it immensely. Nice characterization and flow in narration. All in all, a good penmanship! Have some more confidence in you and please, please, please do keep writing! You have what it takes to be a great writer. That's my confidence for you. Thanks for sharing. :-)