vivas ji good poem keep it up but i have a request for you, i read the same poem somewhere else in the sajha. why do you start a new thread with every poem. a suggestion that you make a thread for yourself where you can have your all peoms. if people like your poem they dont have to search somewhere else to find it. if you have ever analysed your threads its only your single posting and disappears after a couple of hours. sajha is yours and you have a right to start as many thread as you like but if people dont enjoy it whats the point. sometimes i see two threads with the same thing. just my suggestion hai, dont take it otherwise. but do look at your previous threads and see if has got any meaning or any fun. cheers