Nepe Guru Reread your ghazal. It sounded better. But one comment: What happens if you remove म from the last sher ? I thought it was a mere repitition when I was practising reading. निर्णायक मायाको सुनामी हुँ भन्ठानेको भदौरे घाम, माघे ठण्डी, चैते हुरी रहेछु म People have kind of accused me of correcting grammer and others of others work. I can't correct English grammer though.