Sum Off bro, It is a brilliant piece of writing however it sure does have some "holes" in it as IMI said. I can never write anything close to yours and will probably never even attempt. Meaning that you are simply the great writer. That being said, you need to take the feedbacks positively be that feedback negative or positive. I was shocked to see your comment to IMI after his post where he was still praising your article. He mentioned that he would even buy a book if you start wrting professionally. After reading your comments to him, you image on my head has been changed. Be a little more confident in yourself and take the constructive feedbacks in a positive way. Only that will make you a great and successful writer. Even though my respect for you has shrunk a little, I hope that you will make it up by more of your writings. Will wait to see another brilliant work from you!