Posted by: shirish October 30, 2006
16 ghazals from Abhivyakti
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I totally agree with you about the baher. Ghazal itself limits the level of expression of perception. And those written in baher sound weird. You also wrote: "t indeed is a freestyle ghazal with unconventionally random rhyming patterns." I dont agree with you in this. A ghazal MUST have a proper rhyming pattern. If not it can be called something else. I actually benefit if this is true- the ones (mine) I ca lled FAZAL are actually not FAZALS but a free style ghazal.:-)) The following does not fit into a ghazal or a doha. It would have been safe if he had not called it a ghazal. The writer has done same kind of injustice to Muktak also. The operators of such websites need to be educated. गजल हाम्रो नेपाल होमनाथ सुवेदी वुडब्रिज, भर्जिनिया, अक्टोबर २३ हिजो दइ देशको तरुल भो हाम्रो नेपाल आज सबै देशको जरुर भो हाम्रो नेपाल । जति पेले पनि न पेलिने भो चाम्रो नेपाल पीनाको हैन घाउको पाप्रो भो हाम्रो नेपाल । शोषणका वषर्ा सागर अट्ने गाग्रो नेपाल ठूला ठूलै, साना सानै, निष्पक्ष हाम्रो नेपाल । शोषितले शोषित मार्छ विना छाप्रो कमाल कस्तरी थाक्रो विनाको काँक्रो भो हाम्रो नेपाल । न संझनु पाप, संझे भो यो भालुको कपाल पाल्नु न फाल्नुको चौरासीको भो हाम्रो नेपाल । दुनियाँमा कही न भएको हो राम्रो नेपाल पाप्रोको चाम्रो काप्रो भो त्यो छाप्रो हाम्रो नेपाल ।
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