Posted by: newuser October 26, 2006
A THIN SLAB -- FINAL PART
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Sum off, your story-telling is brilliant. I thought this was your best plot so far. You grow up to become a philosopher some day, I wish. The only time I felt a cramp was with the sentence ''... Namaste-a genre usually offered to their superiors by sycophants.'' And a tannoy message at the office took my attention away from the description between ''She looked plain ugly. Awful.” and the last diary. Also, if I may, call Namaste to my old time favourites John Galt, Sitara, Deep, Oys and all others who are writing on, as well as to those who I fought for or against with in my notorious sajha days.
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