Wow!! Awesome!! Brilliant!! This story is better than that of Samrat Upadhyay. Rhythm man I promise that if you publish a book, i will definately purchase it. I rate the Originality of this story as 100% and the presentation skills as 200%. Oh! I loved this line: "She was in charge of it all and along the way she had forgotten why she got into the profession...." By the way, please read my story on the other post and give me your valuable suggestions. Thanks!