Posted by: NaakPore October 22, 2006
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" Her flight landed in San Francisco on the winter of 1998. She had never been outside Nepal in all her life and was pretty excited to be at a new place.Ashima (now known as Ashley) loved her new found independence and had a great time hanging out with Andrea and her friends." I like this sentences because it shows Ashima is changed to Ashley.
Rhythm, this story made me to think deeply. Nice work. Keep on rolling.