Well I am sure there are lot of us who admire your writings but haven't actually said a word. Unlike other times, you've asked all of us to respond and here I am SUM_Off. Please do post the second part to your story. I am looking forward to it. I can see it coming but PLEASE PLEASE Don't let the GIRL DIE or as Tim McGraw says "don't take the girl". I like good endings, and you already killed one of your characters in your last story. Well if she has to, I know thats life.