Posted by: SunnyDev September 10, 2006
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Rythm,
Good narration......... Good narration of Ananya's story. But you were only on the last line. Story becomes impressive if author shows up, often in between the lines.
Oh I forgot, I read you there when Ananya was embarrassed to meet Nimesh. I could have found Ananya exhilarated to find her childhood love ( to name that strong feeling she had)