suyog, i specially liked your setting in the middle ages in a fantasy world kinda like LOTR things going on. i see great potential in your story and the sky is the limit for your imagination to roam in the realm of fantasy and wizardry. writing is not my strongest feat so i am not in any postion to suggest anything good for your story at this point but surely will let u know if i come up with any in future. i have been told i am better at telling stories through camera in my film school. so i decided to stick with direction and getting better at it for most part. its also the reason why i am always amazed by these good or shall i say awsome writers here in sajha and their creativity. its something i will always envy. keep up the good work and good luck and stay in touch.