Posted by: Suyog September 6, 2006
Second Chance.......a fiction
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Okay pearljam, The reason I am asking is I my self like to write, I do not have any writing background or so, I guess it is all just natural. I like to write in every genre. Recently I have just finished writing a film manuscript of Sci- fiction/ action genre, and now in the process of writing a Novell in Fantasy Genre. I need some ideas and inspiration from a good writer as this is my first Novell of 2 parts, about 1000 pages or more. I am too damn lazy to get started or to continue coz I am writing this all alone, I have written chapter 1 and am in the beginning of chapter 2. In chapter one I introduce a family, mother, older brother who is in the royal council and is away form home all the time, middle brother who is always at home, very wise and talented, he hates royal council and never want to join them because he believes that the council only thinks in the favour of the king instead of the people so he wants to be among the people, and a youngest sister who is young, curious, and is home with the mother. Father is travelling a lot and he is the one making decision in the house. Father wants the middle brother to get married because family thinks he has no good future, and maybe his wife will be able to change that. Middle brother does not want to get married, and defiantly not arrange marriage. But when father has decided no one can change that. In chapter two, the girl and her family come to their house to meet the boy. Middle brother does not bother to meet the girl, so he decides to stay in the bed, but the girl alone comes to the boy’s bedroom to meet him. They talk about why he does not want to join the council. He tells his reason of how bad they are and their policy and judgements, she tells him why it is good to join because if he thinks that it is bad and corrupt then he could change that by joining them instead of complaining, and he may be able to change things that needs to be changed and so on. He gets impressed by her thinking. This is just 4 pages in chapter 2, I need some thing more. My aim is that he gets so impress by her that he starts to think this might work, and the girl’s future aim is (She can see the potential in this man, and believes that he will be something some day. She wants to be famous and rich and wants to control other people.) By the way story takes place in a middle age in a fantasy world of wizards, strange creatures, kings and queens and stuff like that.
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